I love the eyes to show God’s consciousness in the bush. Have you considered also moving the fire from outside to inside the leaves and stems, a bush *made of* fire rather than literally on fire? The ‘fire’ being mythic shorthand for conscious energy within… Like Annie Dillard: “I saw the backyard cedar charged and transfigured, each cell buzzing with flame.”
P.S. I love you stuff!
But does it sing?
Moses bush would be burning with purity’s flame that is white. I like the work.